The Garden Lesson


The scorched earth
ignored and neglected
with no evidence
of last year’s beauties.

A garden sits smothered in weeds
useless in this condition,
taking her,
while holding hands
they begin
the Lesson of the Garden.


What part of your life is neglected?

What is the "one" thing you would change?

They stand
looking at the overgrowth
such carelessness
turning to his sweet, He says,
"It will be up to you to clear this
space of neglected waste."
She stared with questioning
disbelief at his want,
until sadness closed shut.


What was your largest sacrifice?

Do you trust enough to give completely?


Timidly among the weeds
she took her place.
Softness of her body
amongst such sharpness,
in absolute disbelief
how can this could be expected.
Bowing in submission
she begins pulling
with anger filled rage,
she’s crying
with shouting words inside,
“i need Your help!”


If asked, how far would you go?

What was the last thing you quit?

Under shade of tree
not wanting the sun,
He drinks,
soothingly cool lemonade.
Watching her shoulders
match the glow
on her cheeks
so softly reddened.
Wiping away
the sweat on his brow
nothing need be said,
He’s simply watching.


Would you ask for help if truly needed?

When was the last time you asked?

Tired and near exhaustion
the land was being stripped free.
On knees inching forward,
still pulling,
her once delicate hands
now bleed.
A tear slips from her eye
that her shoulder
quickly hides.


Do you consider yourself emotional?

Would you fight or argue in public?

The area now cleared
she stares in His direction.
Easing from His space
He inspects the garden.
There in the corner
a bush covered in thorn.
Eyes of disbelief
He instructs its removal.
Too tired and weak,
she simply obeys.


What are you most proud of?

What was the last thing you gave away?

Clean, bare and pure
the garden sits ready.
He scoops her
into his arms
there’s time to recover
a heated bath
in silken bubbles
he gently places her,
delicately undressed from frame.
Every muscle aches.
No longer can she hold on
to the emotion
in this water
what was known now breaks.
Soft whispers,
soothing music and candlelight
begin to invade her void.


What part of you is most sensitive?

How often do you find time for yourself?

The next morning,
she was pampered,
A feast was brought
to her in bed.
There in a fresh light,
He opened the blinds
exposing the work she created.
Proud smiles
on their faces
they laugh in delight.
Helping her into clothing
His gentle kisses
embrace her completely.


What will be your most intimate moment?

What do you love most about yourself?

To their Garden
where she will sit
being her Master,
He will plant
their favorite flowers.
First choice
the Gardenia shrub
rich aromatic flavor
filling their sense of scent.
To the row of Wisteria
hanging over vine.
To dotted roses
of yellow, crimson, and white.
Daisies, hibiscus, and jasmine
will grow in time.
Their garden
now planted and complete


What is most sacred to you?

What is one thing you can't replace?

Near his love again,
their eyes meet
Adoring the beauty
of their creation
they all into
their kissing hour.
In the arms
of the other,
he asks,
“What are you holding
behind your back?”
Silently,
she extends a closed hand
eyes avoid eyes.
Opening slowly
she exposes to Him
A thorn.


What is symbolic of her thorn?

Do you currently hold any?

Now complete
They’ll discuss
in beautiful detail
her answers
to these questions in
The Garden Lesson


2 responses to “The Garden Lesson”

  1. There is a lot here … i think i need time to think on it. Would you mind if i was to reference your work on my blog? i can see a lot of things i would love to digest and work through but i don’t want to pretend the ideas are mine when they originate here.

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    1. Please, be My quest in sharing. Like Shakespeare said, “We must have poetry in our lives.”

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